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"Legend Unleashed" (Keeping Secrets, Book 1) by M. Latimer-Ridley (Young Adult, Urban Fantasy genre) Book trailer: [link]
When an infamous criminal is unleashed from his prison, it has consequences for everyone in Carwick. Temperance Levinthal in particular…
Temperance is satisfied with her ordinary life. Dealing with her eccentric, childlike parents is all the excitement she needs. That changes when Alastair Byron returns home.
After a failed matchmaking attempt by her father, sparks fly between her and Alastair-just not the good kind.
They are forced together though, when they are implicated in a grisly murder. Their search for the truth leads them to a secret world beneath Carwick, filled with werewolves, wizards and other magical faey.
However, uncovering the truth is far more dangerous than they’d ever imagined.
There are secrets within secrets.
Even Alastair may be more than he seems.
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This story comes from years of fangirl squee-ing and reading the likes of Harry Potter, Twilight, Lord of the Rings, Kelley Armstrong (particularly her Darkest Powers series) and Cassandra Clare's The Mortal Instruments series.
Like everyone else, we've dreamed of telling our own stories of fantasy and romance, adventure and magic. So, a few years ago, we decided to start writing our own. We really hope you guys like it! And you're willing to join us on this little adventure, wherever it may lead.
And if you squee, we'll be squee-ing too, cos that's all we ever wanted to do!
wow, just amazing, i would love to be able to write like that. English is my second language, although I had endless ideas for a story, I could never put it like that in words.
Gosh! Thank you so much ! The idea is really the hardest part, after that it's all practice so definitely get writing your ideas ! Your English is fantastic never would have thought it was your second language! I would love to be able to speak another language, so amazing
I - I am not sure how I can go about critiquing this, a fully published work! But for me, the only thing I could say would be that I would like to see detail in the areas of the underground city, as everything else, the mundane in the chapter, is very well described!
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